右派论坛 首页 右派论坛
youpai.org
 
 常见问题常见问题   搜索搜索   会员列表会员列表   团队团队   注册注册 
 个人资料个人资料   登陆查看您的站内信件登陆查看您的站内信件   登陆登陆 

(电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》Screenplay: America Love Story
前往页面 上一个  1, 2
 
发表新帖   回复帖子    右派论坛 首页 -> 右派论坛
阅读上一个主题 :: 阅读下一个主题  
作者 留言
redbluewhite85



注册时间: 2017-07-08
帖子: 22
来自: 美国宾州

帖子发表于: Fri+Nov+10,+2017+11:45+am    发表主题: (电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》 Screenplay: America Love Story 引用并回复

第九幕
Screen 9

25,玛格丽特家,晚,内
玛格丽特
啊,舅妈,请你发慈悲,救我出火炕。
凯瑟琳
唉,宝贝,心病终须心药治,解铃还须系铃人。
他俩进来。乔安娜找容器,放鲜花。玛格丽特面壁,凯瑟琳帮着拭泪,要他们别说话。
玛格丽特
(耐不住)
我能提个问题吗?
唐大之
(很无奈)
欢迎能交流看法。
25,INT.MARGARET’S HOME-EVENING
MARGARET
Oho,aunt, please you to have pity, rescue me from the trap.
CATHERINE
Yes, baby, anxiety must be healed by anxious medicine finally, solving a problem needs somebody who made this problem.
They come in. Joanna looks for container, puts fresh flower into it. Margaret faces wall. Catherine helps wiping away her tears, asks them letting alone.
MARGARET
(being intolerable)
Can I put a question to you?
DAZHI TANG
(having no alternative)
Welcome exchanging perspective.

26,玛格丽特家,晚,内
凯瑟琳扶玛格丽特坐好。
玛格丽特
如果不是女朋友,你会给我过生日?
唐大之
曾经为你过生日,我承认这个事实。
玛格丽特
那好,绝对不是见钱眼开。乔安娜一千九百元,我就该两千三百元。
唐大之
行呀,钱活动在身体以外。数字问题芝麻绿豆。人的健康最为重要。
玛格丽特
拿来!
唐大之
稍等。
唐大之出去,回来,说生日快乐,递上支票。玛格丽特看着,泪流,要唐大之,抱她。唐大之照做。
26, INT.MARGARET’S HOME-EVENING
Catherine helps Margaret up, sits.
MARGARET
If I wasn’t your girlfriend, had you kept a happy birthday to me?
DAZHI TANG
We’ve once kept a happy birthday to you, I admit this fact.
MARGARET
Then,I’m absolutely not moved at the sight of money. Joanna had dollars 1,900, and I should have dollars 2,300 too.
DAZHI TANG
Right, money exercises outside body. Numeral problem is a little matter. Personal health is the most important.
MARGARET
Give me!
DAZHI TANG
Wait a minute.
Dazhi Tang goes out, comes back, says happy birthday, passes check. Margaret sees it, tears, asks Dazhi Tang embracing her. Dazhi Tang does.

27,合亭,日,外
凯瑟琳唱《我有一个梦》。
拍结婚照。
前所未有的超然独立的魅力永恒的摄影艺术经典思想展现。(省略)
雪莉是乔安娜的伴娘,沃顿是唐大之的伴郎。
27,EXT.HARMONY PAVILION-DAY
Catherine sings I Have a Dream.
Making a marriage photograph.
It’s very wonderful that unfolds an unprecedented, detachedly independent, eternally glamourous photography art classics thought. (Omit)
Shirley is Joanna’s bridesmaid, Warton is Dazhi Tang’s best man at a wedding.
返回页首
阅览会员资料 发送站内信件
redbluewhite85



注册时间: 2017-07-08
帖子: 22
来自: 美国宾州

帖子发表于: Sun+Dec+03,+2017+4:39+pm    发表主题: (电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》Screenplay: America Love Story 引用并回复

第十幕
Screen 10

28, 福州路,日,外
街景。
CUT TO:
614弄,日,外
墙上标牌: 福州路614弄。
CUT TO:
唐大之老屋,日,内
李水儿
(感叹)
唉,来也匆忙,去也仓促,交流太少。
唐大之
(沉重)
嗯,作为朋友,还是可以,推心置腹。
乔安娜
(真诚)
耶,知识分子,修养很好,有话请讲。
李水儿
我属于高智低能。前后读书十九年。最害怕的是寂寞。
唐大之
要优秀不怕孤独。等待时往往伶仃。没分离哪来团聚。
李水儿
唉,此一时,彼一时。没有思想境界,就会迷失方向。
唐大之
是,水不开,偏提壶。我们还在同居,你已开始网恋。
28, EXT.FUZHOU ROAD-DAY
Scenery on the street.
CUT TO:
EXT.614 LANE-DAY
On the wall the label writes 614 Lane,FuZhou Road.
CUT TO:
INT.DAZHI TANG’S APARTMENT-DAY
SHUIER LI
(sighing with feeling)
Alas!Come also in a hurry, go hastily as well, we exchange too less.
DAZHI TANG
(being with a heavy heart )
What?As our friend, you can still treat a person with sincerity.
JOANNA
(being sincere)
Yes, as an intellectual, your accomplishment is very nice. So you have something, you say something.
SHUIER LI
I belong to super wisdom and deficient ability. I’d attended school for nineteen years. I’m most afraid for loneliness.
DAZHI TANG
If you want excellence, you don’t fear solitariness. When you’re waiting for, you’re frequently lonely.Being without separation,where do you have reunion from?
SHUIER LI
Alas!For this short while, for that short while. If you don’t have a ideological realm, you’d take a unrealistical action.
DAZHI TANG
Yes, water hasn’t been boiled, you’ve deliberately carried the kettle. When we still cohabited, you’d started a mutual love in the internet.

29,唐大之老屋,日,内
李水儿到窗前,流泪。
李水儿
是的,以单身身份,你移民美国。要过好几年,才能来接我。
唐大之
须知,不花时间读,能取得学位?你知道心急,难吃热豆腐。
李水儿
问题在于我所有的努力都付之东流了。
唐大之
你该从失败当中汲取不再犯错的教训。
李水儿
但再找像你这样的优秀者,我三十了,非常困难,没有信心。
乔安娜站起,靠近唐大之,手放他肩上。
李水儿
乔安娜,嗲美眉,请不要摆出神圣不可侵犯的样子。
唐大之
李水儿,原谅她。她是处女,初恋,新婚,当然冰清玉洁啦。
29, INT.DAZHI TANG’S APARTMENT-DAY
Shuier Li goes to the window, tears.
SHUIER LI
Yes, as a single identity, you immigrated into America. But you should spend several years, then you could arrange for me to take a migration.
DAZHI TANG
You should know if you don’t go to a university, can you gain a degree?If you’re impatient, could you eat hot bean curds?
SHUIER LI
In an embarrassing situation, my personal efforts were all defeated.
DAZHI TANG
You must draw the failing lesson from no longer repeating an offence.
SHUIER LI
But I’m thirty years old.I haven’t had confidence.I only confront difficulties to find you such an excellent man again.
Joanna stands, closes to Dazhi Tang, puts her hand on his shoulder.
SHUIER LI
Joanna, a lovely sweet, please don’t assume a sacrosanct manner.
DAZHI TANG
Shuier Li, forgive her. She’s a virgin. She’s first loved. She’s the newlywed. As it should be as clean as ice and as pure as jade.

30,唐大之老屋,日,内
李水儿
知道,我只是想把话说出来,现在心里就好受多了。
唐大之
房子请你继续照看。你可作为物质依托,审慎地去寻找男友。
李水儿
你不打算把它卖掉?
唐大之
乔安娜提出留着,等子女长大回来,如求发展可落脚。
乔安娜
我认为上海非常棒!
乔安娜把唐大之和李水儿拉近。
乔安娜(CONT’D)
复旦大学, 师兄师妹,朋友一场,情谊长存,相互合影,弥足珍贵。
唐大之和李水儿感谢。
30, INT.DAZHI TANG’S APARTMENT-DAY
SHUIER LI
I know. I only wanted telling you something. I’ve felt more comfortableness in my heart now. DAZHI TANG
Please you to continue looking after this apartment. You can regard as a substance dependence, cautiously go to seeking boyfriends.
SHUIER LI
Don’t you intend to sell it?
DAZHI TANG
Joanna has put forward keeping back. We’ll wait for our children growing up and returning. If they seek a development, they could stop for a rest or live temporarily.
JOANNA
I think Shanghai is very wonderful!
Joanna draws Dazhi Tang and Shuier Li close.
JOANNA(CONT’D)
Senior fellow apprentice and junior sister apprentice made friends with Fudan University. Your friendship lives forever. It’s very precious to let you take a group photo.
Dazhi Tang and Shuier Li thank.
返回页首
阅览会员资料 发送站内信件
redbluewhite85



注册时间: 2017-07-08
帖子: 22
来自: 美国宾州

帖子发表于: Sun+Dec+03,+2017+4:45+pm    发表主题: (电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》Screenplay: America Love Story 引用并回复

第十一幕
Screen 11

31,花蓓蕾邻居住处,日,外
他们走近,犹豫。唐洋洋叫爸爸,奔来。唐大之挥手,推开栅栏门,蹲下,抱唐洋洋,流泪,颤抖。
唐大之
洋洋,宝贝,一年多没见,你又长高了。
唐洋洋
爸爸,你好,我常梦见你。我好想你啊。
唐大之
在电话里你为何不说呢?
唐洋洋
我不方便这么告诉你啊。
俩人拥抱。
31, EXT.BEILEI HUA’S NEIGHBOUR HOUSE-DAY
Dazhi Tang and Joanna come, hesitate. Yangyang Tang calls father, runs. Dazhi Tang waves, pushes the paling’s door, crouches, hugs Yangyang Tang, tears, trembles.
DAZHI TANG
Yangyang, baby, we haven’t met more than one year, you’ve grown tall again.
YANGYANG TANG
Hello, dad, I often see you in my dream. I miss you terribly!
DAZHI TANG
Why haven’t you told me about these things in phone?
YANGYANG TANG
I didn’t have any convenience to say this way.
They embrace.

32,花蓓蕾邻居住处,日,内
乔安娜与唐洋洋,陆晓婷说笑。陆师母与唐大之聊天。
陆师母
你们开车过来用多长时间?
唐大之
从宾州到纽约再到多伦多,如果不停大约十一个小时。但不能疲劳驾驶,在中途必须休息。
陆师母
你应该经常过来看看他们。花蓓蕾又离婚已经有一年。在这里买了别墅,我们老乡加近邻。
唐大之
她从来都自以为是绝色美女。
陆师母
社区里,学校里,酒吧里,追求她的人真得是很多嗳。
唐大之
那好啊,要这样,她才会,不把洋洋当人质来要挟我。
陆师母
要对孩子好,就须对娘好。
唐大之
夫妻是法律关系,离了就彻底断掉。子女是血缘关系,必将保持到永远。
陆师母
想想过去,你当解放日报记者,她是芭蕾舞团演员。上海滩上穷扎台型,肯定属于非常般配。
唐大之
她有预谋,搭识老外突然分手,一定要到加拿大来。那时洋洋刚刚一岁,搞得我差点跳黄浦。
陆师母
唉,头发长,见识短。走错路,原谅她。为了洋洋,复婚算了。
唐大之
不,时不再,景已迁,没可能。在以后,洋洋移民,到美国去。
32, INT.BEILEI HUA’S NEIGHBOUR HOUSE-DAY
Joanna, Yangyang Tang and Xiaoting Lu chat, laugh. Master’s wife Lu and Dazhi Tang talk.
MASTER’S WIFE LU
How long time have you spent in driving here?
DAZHI TANG
From Pennsylvania to New York and Toronto, if you don’t stop, maybe, you need about 11 hours. But we can’t drive in fatigue, we must take a rest halfway.
MASTER’S WIFE LU
You should often come to visit them. Beilei Hua has again divorced for one year. She bought a villa here. We’re the fellow-townsman from Shanghai. Now we’ve become a near neighbor.
DAZHI TANG
She’s always considered herself in the right of unrivalled beauty.
MASTER’S WIFE LU
Really and truly!Many menfolk have chased her in community, school, bar.
DAZHI TANG
Perfect!If it’s like this, then she hasn’t threatened me with Yangyang as a hostage.
MASTER’S WIFE LU
If you want to treat your child well, you must handle his mother kindly.
DAZHI TANG
Man and wife have a law relation. then they make a complete break with mutuality after a divorce. Offspring is a genetic connection, there isn’t the slightest doubt to keep it forever.
MASTER’S WIFE LU
Think previousness, as a reporter you worked in Jiefang Daily, she was a ballet-dancer. You made a zha dashing very much in Shanghai Beach. You would belong to be highly matched.
DAZHI TANG
She had a premeditation, colluded with an old foreigner, then suddenly separated, was bound to come to Canada. When Yangyang was only one year old, she made me nearly drowning myself in Huangpu River.
MASTER’S WIFE LU
Yes, had long hair but short wit, went to a wrong road, please pardon her. You restore the former marriage for Yangyang. Oh, forget it!
DAZHI TANG
No, impossible!Circumstances chang with the passage of time. Yangyang should immigrate into America afterwards.

33,龙珠餐厅,下午,外
他们到达。
花蓓蕾要拥抱,唐大之回避,伸手;花蓓蕾把唐大之的手提上去,脚尖点地,亮鹤立式;转身,成迎风展翅舞姿,来几个大踢腿,移至乔安娜处,打招呼。
乔安娜回应, 紧张,镇静,行动,慢步一拍一步,快步一拍两步,摆动臀部,跳拉丁舞,伦巴,恰恰等。
双方准备。
33,EXT.DRAGON PEARL HALL-AFTERNOON
They arrive.
Beilei Hua wants to hug, Dazhi Tang avoids, stretches his hand;Beilei Hua holds up Dazhi Tang’s hand, stands by her tiptoe, shows a crane vertical; turns round, becomes the dance gesture of spreading wings windward, takes several big split kicks, gyrates to Joanna, says hello.
Joanna replies,tenses, calms, acts, walks by one beat one pace, steps by one beat two paces, swings her buttocks as Latin Dance,Rumba,Cha-Cha,and so on.
The both sides prepare.
返回页首
阅览会员资料 发送站内信件
redbluewhite85



注册时间: 2017-07-08
帖子: 22
来自: 美国宾州

帖子发表于: Sun+Dec+03,+2017+4:51+pm    发表主题: (电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》Screenplay: America Love Story 引用并回复

第十二幕
Screen 12

34,龙珠餐厅,下午,外
花蓓蕾把MP3耳塞放进耳朵。
花蓓蕾
小朋友,我给你们跳上几段,好不好?
大家鼓掌。唐洋洋最起劲。花蓓蕾表达《天鹅湖》。乔安娜戴上MP3耳塞。
乔安娜
我助兴,给大家来几个动作,行不行?
大家鼓掌。乔安娜挥洒 “芭啦芭啦”。花蓓蕾演绎《睡美人》。乔安娜运作 “啦啦队舞”。花蓓蕾展现《吉赛尔》。乔安娜推出“热舞劲舞”。
34,EXT.DRAGON PEARL HALL-AFTERNOON
Beilei Hua stuffs MP3 her earhole.
BEILEI HUA
Children, I dance several sections for you, good or not?
Everybody applauds. Yangyang Tang is most vigorous. Beilei Hua conveys Swan Lake. Joanna puts on MP3 earplug.
JOANNA
I add to the fun, deliver some movements for all, okay or not?
Everybody applauds. Joanna sprinkles Para Para. Beilei Hua deducts Sleeping Beauty. Joanna dances Cheering Squad. Beilei Hua unfolds Giselle. Joanna extends Dance Dance Dance.

35,龙珠餐厅,傍晚,外
唐大之叫停。要陆晓婷,把钱退回。陆晓婷不干。看客们散去。
唐大之
指责古典芭蕾,因循守旧,脱离生活,只究技巧,我不同意。现代舞活力大,反映真情实感,合乎运动法则,我很喜欢。应该指出,历史沿革,不可分割;都是艺术,难比高下。再次鼓掌,谢谢献演。
大家鼓掌。花蓓蕾低头,沉默。
乔安娜
(用上海方言)
阿拉上海人,五香豆,小笼包,鸭血汤,还有老咸菜——炒肉丝。
大家鼓掌。
陆晓婷
伯伯,我们有钱啦,可以吃饭咯。
唐大之
晓婷,言之有理哦,行动起来吧。
35, EXT.DRAGON PEARL HALL-NIGHTFALL
Dazhi Tang calls stop, asks Xiaoting Lu returning money. Xiaoting Lu refuses.
Spectators leave.
DAZHI TANG
Censure the classical ballet for following a beaten track, breaking off life, going only into skill, I don’t agree. The modern dance exhibits a great vigour, reflects real sentiment, conforms to motion rule, I like very much. Should point out, the history of change and development can’t be indivisible; both are arts, it’s difficult to be compared with superiority or inferiority. Clap again, thank you in performance.
Everybody applauds. Beilei Hua bows her head, silences.
JOANNA
(using Shanghai Dialect)
阿拉上海人,五香豆,小笼包,鸭血汤,还有老咸菜——炒肉丝。
(Our Shanghai native, spiced beans, small meat-filled from the food steamer, duck blood soup, and another salted vegetables——frying meat shreds. )
Everybody applauds.
XIAOTING LU
Uncle, we’ve had money, we can take supper.
DAZHI TANG
Xiaoting, be sound reasonable, so we go into action.

36,家,日,内
唐大之
知识的主要来源出自书本。
乔安娜
你造诣渊博就是喜欢饱学。
唐大之
第四街上和市政厅旁有图书馆。
乔安娜
我生长在这里难道还会不知晓?
唐大之
明天开始,就像上班,你去阅读。
乔安娜
感谢建议,学富五车,我要成才。
唐大之
每天二十元。吃一顿饭,喝矿泉水,嚼口香片。
乔安娜
钱是多了点。然而不过,能省则省,绝不浪费。
唐大之
姑娘,肯做生意了?
乔安娜
爷叔,我们成交了!
36, INT.HOME-DAY
DAZHI TANG
The main source of knowledge starts from books.
JOANNA
You’ve had erudition because you’re scholarly.
DAZHI TANG
There’re two libraries in the fourth street and by the side of town hall.
JOANNA
I’ve grown up here, how wouldn’t I know the matter?
DAZHI TANG
You go to reading like starting work from tomorrow.
JOANNA
Thank your suggestion, I need being wealthy in knowledge, I want to become an intellectual.
DAZHI TANG
I give you $20 every day, have lunch, drink mineral water, chew bubble gum.
JOANNA
Money may be a bit too much, but I’d economize wherever possible, absolutely not waste.
DAZHI TANG
Girl, have you agreed to do this business?
JOANNA
Uncle, we’ve made the bargain!
返回页首
阅览会员资料 发送站内信件
redbluewhite85



注册时间: 2017-07-08
帖子: 22
来自: 美国宾州

帖子发表于: Sun+Dec+03,+2017+4:57+pm    发表主题: (电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》Screenplay: America Love Story 引用并回复

第十三幕
Screen 13

37,家,晚,内
唐大之打电话。
乔安娜(O.S.)
今天情况有点特殊。
唐大之
难道发生什么事情?
乔安娜(O.S.)
唉,玛格丽特找我,硬拉我去喝酒。
唐大之
哦,久违玛格丽特。她有什么理由?
乔安娜(O.S.)
她找了男友,搬到阿伦敦。我能不助兴?
唐大之
是个好消息。我们超脱了。但下不为例。
乔安娜(O.S.)
真是, 我们总好像欠她什么?
唐大之
否定,别重蹈农人怜蛇覆辙!
唐大之看挂钟。
唐大之(CONT’D)
等着,我开车来接你。
乔安娜(O.S.)
不要,我十分钟到了。
唐大之
不行,醉驾就是危险!
37, INT.HOME-EVENING
Dazhi Tang phones.
JOANNA(O.S.)
This situation is some special today.
DAZHI TANG
Surely it doesn’t mean what’s happened?
JOANNA(O.S.)
Alas! Margaret looked for me. She insisted on going to drink by pulling me.
DAZHI TANG
Oh, how long it is since we last met Margaret! What reason did she has?
JOANNA(O.S.)
She’s had her boyfriend, moved to Allentown. So wouldn’t I have added to the fun?
DAZHI TANG
This is a good news. We’ve been detached. But not to be repeated.
JOANNA(O.S.)
It’s too bad there seems to be what have we owed her?
DAZHI TANG
Negate, don’t recommit the same error of The Farmer Pitied the Snake!
Dazhi Tang sees a clock on the wall.
DAZHI TANG(CONT’D)
Wait, I drive to greet you.
JOANNA(O.S.)
No, I get home in ten minutes.
DAZHI TANG
Be no good, drunk driving exactly is a danger!

38,家,晚,内
乔安娜翻胃。
唐大之抱乔安娜,乔安娜喷污秽。他们进厕所。唐大之照顾乔安娜,搓背,漱口,洗脸;再抱乔安娜,放到沙发上,清扫地上脏物。
唐大之端水,喂乔安娜。
38,INT.HOME-EVENING
Joanna regurgitates.
Dazhi Tang hugs Joanna, Joanna spurts filthiness. They get into lavatory. Dazhi Tang looks after Joanna, twists backbone, gargles, washes face;hugs Joanna,puts her in sofa, cleans dirt on the carpet.
Dazhi Tang takes water, feeds Joanna.

39,家,晚,内
唐大之
放松,说实话,又碰到问题?
乔安娜
抱歉,老错误,我空腹喝酒。
唐大之
为什么?
乔安娜
想省钱。
唐大之
讨厌!玛格丽特又来闹霸王杯?
乔安娜
就是,现在她白喝而由我买单。
唐大之
嗯,你现在肯定很饿了!
乔安娜
哎,你怎么了如指掌呢?
39,INT.HOME-EVENING
DAZHI TANG
Relax, tell me the truth, have you met with a problem?
JOANNA
Sorry, the old mistake, I’ve drunk on my empty stomach.
DAZHI TANG
Why?
JOANNA
I want to save money.
DAZHI TANG
Disgusting!Did Margaret stir up trouble in the overlord’s cup again?
JOANNA
Exactly!She’s merely drunk these days, but I’ve paid at every turn.
DAZHI TANG
What?Now you’re terribly hungry!
JOANNA
Hey, how would you be thoroughly familiar with this matter?
返回页首
阅览会员资料 发送站内信件
从以前的帖子开始显示:   
发表新帖   回复帖子    右派论坛 首页 -> 右派论坛 论坛时间为 PST (美国/加拿大)
前往页面 上一个  1, 2
2页/共2

 
转跳到:  
不能发布新主题
不能在这个论坛回复主题
不能在这个论坛编辑自己的帖子
不能在这个论坛删除自己的帖子
不能在这个论坛发表投票


youpai.org


Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group